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Sally: I'm never letting you go again, Sonic. Never.

Sonic: Me neither, Sal

He pulls her closer, and they kiss passionately, holding each other tightly. Ken sighs at this again.

Ken: (thinking) You have to let her go.

The couple release each other, and Sally looks at Ken.

Sally: I'm sorry, but I don't think it would work out anyway. I have my duties to my people, and you to yours, and I've never considered long-distance relationships a good idea.

Ken: It's okay, I understand.

Sally: Thank you.

Ken: Your welcome, and best wishes you two have a good life together.

Sonic: Thanks man.

Ken: No problem.

They then turn to Tails and Fiona, who have finally separated.

Tails: Wow.

Fiona: Yeah, just wow.

Tails: That was amazing.

Fiona: It was heavenly.

Tails: Thanks.

Fiona: No prob.

Sonic: Heh, are we interrupting something?

Tails: We just finished, actually.

Sonic: I know, just saying.

Lightning: I'll admit, it was a nice sight.

Fiona: THanks.

Lightning: No problem.

Ken: I guess we better go to the last clan.

Sonic: Right. Who's next?

???: My clan.

Everyone turns around and sees Espio.

Sonic: Espio? What are you doing here?

Espio: I'm here to help you negotiate with my clan.

Sonic: Well, lead the way.

Lightning: What should we do with the other Destructix?

Fiona: He has a good point.

Sally: Well, I was kinda thinking we could abandon them in the woods like what Tails and Fiona did with the ninjas, but I'm not sure if it'll work.

Fiona: Well, it could work.

Sally: Yeah, but...who can lift Simian?

Tails: Um, I did drag Robotnik himself behind me with my bare hands recently, so I could help there.

Fiona: Wow, really?

Tails: Yeah. It was hard.

Sonic: Yeah, but the guy punched me in the face.

Fiona: Can someone explain to me what happened?

Sally: To make it short, Sonic's final battle with Robotnik sent the latter into insanity, to the point where Snively locked him up and took over. Robotnik escaped in this machine and gotten into the forest, where Sonic and Tails confronted him, and you may know the story from there. I regret not putting Snively under arrest, since he's one of the big problems we're facing now.

Fiona: Hmm... perhaps you guys should consider killing these guys? Seriously, how many people have been hurt, roboticized, legionized or outright killed because of those maniacs? I know about the moral dilemma, but it's personal with me. After all, I went through the whole torture thing myself.

Tails: She does have a good point, guys.

Fiona: And hey, if it's against your code, I'll do it.

Sally: Well, I'll put it onto serious consideration. Now, though, let's get these goons back in the woods.

Espio: Right.

Sonic: Okay, someone help me with the ape.

Tails: On it.

Together, they shift the three villains into the forest.

Fiona: Well, now that that's sorted, we should get going.

Espio: Agreed.

Sonic: Well, let's get going!
And there we have our finale! It leaves off pretty much exact where the comic leaves off, but with Fiona there.

I'm not going to explain why Espio is suddenly one of a Shinobi clan and running around without the CHaotix or any of that, because it's even more retarded that the usual Flynn bullshit.

I loved writing Fiona's dialogue in this. THis is how I think she should be written- snarky to the extreme, but still good. You just don't see a lot of it in my current fics because she's sort of recovering from traumatic events. Or going through traumatic events.

And yes, I invoked "WHy don't you just shoot him". Because seriously, what reason do they have for not killing Eggman?

As for the whole "dragging Eggman by himself" thing, I don't get it either. I like it when Tails is badass, but seriously. Eggman weighs as much as the Egg Carrier itself. His stomach is the only thing in the universe that has enough room to contain his ego.

HiSHE To-do list:

134 (Wow, not Flynn)
160
172 ( Possible collab with :iconbattlebrothertherix:)
179 (Double bill with 134)
BNM (Collab with :iconknd6:)
SU15 (Collab with :iconreecetails:)
Lockdown
230
238
239


134 and 179 are probably my next targets. Lockdown is going to be a bit heavier, and might need a fic spawned from it. Whether Therix and I collab is based on whether he's up for it and whether I can stop him from making it too violent. As for BNM, that's going to be a bit of a project, and a long time coming, probably after LaiSB is finished, and more of SSZ is done.
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Cubular Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012
Lol. What's with them and just putting unconscious people in a forest??
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Vorahk295 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I dunno.
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Cubular Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012
Ok
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Vorahk295 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah.
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ragnarokrayshakk Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No there is nothing big enough to contain Robotniks ego. Not even the universe is big enough.

Tis nice.
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Vorahk295 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Eggman's stomach is an endless void.

Thanks.
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ragnarokrayshakk Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No not even the void is big enough.

Your welcome.
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Vorahk295 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Not, THE Void, just A Void. And it's endless.

NP.
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ragnarokrayshakk Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ah now it makes sense.
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Vorahk295 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah.
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